Shave Awesome, but...
I thought the video was really funny and the fbf was cool too, but the character themselves were kinda cheaply made. I also think the reason that this video isn't getting very good reviews is because it's missing a background and sound. You could just put a background layer underneath the animation and you could look for someone to voice act for you in the audio portal or on the flash forums. Using speech bubbles makes it look kinda cheap as well. Other than that, great animation!
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